Friday, September 12, 2008

Haiku

the rain lightly falls
on the grass, sidewalk, steps, street
kids will track in mud

delicious hummus
no one else will enjoy it
all the more for me

rode bike through torential rain
soaked completely through
simon changes pants at school

5 comments:

tetrahedron said...

the whole thing was great but that last line clinched it - classic!

Tim said...

Ooh, these are lovely! I love the tonka at the end.

I've been reading Bashō recently. Awesome.

Tim said...

By the way, did you perchance receive my email?

Regina said...

I thought I had the wrong site! That was delightful!

Regina said...

Re: our conversation. I like "the rain lightly falls" Don't change perfection.